on journeys

18 Aug 2008 | public | email this page

if i could see your journey

i would not have said those things

if you could see my journey

you would forgive everything

if we could see His journey

we would not fail to pray

to love each other better

until our final day
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Submitted by Raym on August 19, 2008 - 8:07pm.
Hi! Michael. Thanks for this poem. It has a a lovely sort of three fold incisive perspective. It reminded me a little on Robert Burns, the Scottish poet who said, "Oh would some power the gift gie us to see ourselves as others see us."
I think Burns could have learned something from your poem Michael. God Bless,
Raym
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